Tuesday, April 13, 2010

Ada's for April 13

(pocketed)

4 comments:

  1. Anonymous9:42 PM

    This one makes me feel stoned and woozy. You almost have to read it in one whole breath. It's great.

    David

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  2. Anonymous11:14 PM

    Nostalgia for a life I never lived. Whirling images embrace this piece. I'm better for reading it.

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  3. Thanks Jason and David. It's a rough rough one, but there's an energy to it that I like so far. We'll see where it ends up in the end!

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  4. This is a very lovely poem. Thanks for sharing

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