"Writing is a way of saying you and the world have a chance." -Richard Hugo
Ada, I loved this. It's one of those poems you read a perfect time to know that someone else really does feel like this too. Thank you for sharing!Melissa
It's true, Ada, beautiful. Moving and moving and moving our mouths.
Thanks you two! It needs a little editing. It all came out one fell swoop and I need to tighten in up. But I'm glad you like it.
stunning, lala, 'specially for a draft!
oh wow! It's true! Ergo it's everything!
Ada, I loved this. It's one of those poems you read a perfect time to know that someone else really does feel like this too. Thank you for sharing!
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It's true, Ada, beautiful. Moving and moving and moving our mouths.
ReplyDeleteThanks you two! It needs a little editing. It all came out one fell swoop and I need to tighten in up. But I'm glad you like it.
ReplyDeletestunning, lala, 'specially for a draft!
ReplyDeleteoh wow! It's true! Ergo it's everything!
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