Tuesday, April 13, 2010

Ada's for April 13

(pocketed)

4 comments:

Anonymous said...

This one makes me feel stoned and woozy. You almost have to read it in one whole breath. It's great.

David

jasonriedy said...

Nostalgia for a life I never lived. Whirling images embrace this piece. I'm better for reading it.

Ada said...

Thanks Jason and David. It's a rough rough one, but there's an energy to it that I like so far. We'll see where it ends up in the end!

Anisa said...

This is a very lovely poem. Thanks for sharing